Open Your Heart [Revision]

Go open your closed heart; let your love pour
In filling your empty soul full to top
Let it seep in; don’t wait for it to stop
Now ,for your love this time will start to soar.
Unbound your love and let love bound away
Watch it skipping, hopping through tall grasses
Try to keep up through narrow passes
For your love won’t leave; but will find the way.
Love will find its home this day either way
Through open windows or the open door
Straight to any heart it will find to pour
Into soul; love finds you this very day.
Love will enter you with might and gusto
For you had lost it from so long ago

Revised as my attempt to do a sonnet from what the original was like. The poem uses the rhyming scheme of abba cddc effe gg.


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